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ya good try

prolly won't hear dis on da radio

Its pretty good

I really liked the very beginning until the drums come in and the main melody got really quiet. You are gonna need someone to rap to this to make it more interesting. The melody is very good and the brass is ok. Its got potential but fix a few things.

Shallowdreamers responds:

Appreciate it, man, Im going to fix it up.

Im luvin this

The distortion on the guitars is done perfectly as well as everything else. Awesome job :)

Latency responds:

Thanks! :)

Aweasome

Once I finally get my computer working again I would love to use this thanks!

Sweet

You chose some great stuff to sample keep up the good work.

Nice

Very relaxing to listen to. The only thing I can point out is that the snare either needs to be turned down or replaced (I think a clap would go nicely). Someone should use this good job!

Great

I couldn't seem to find anything to criticize. The lyrics are well thought out and the beat is pretty typical but definitely creates the mood you were aiming for. I guess the only thing I could say about this is that it feels...average. It feels blah haha idk. Good job

Soothing

Its got a very laid back feel to it and I'm sure someone would love to use this. The drum are rather loud compared to the rest of the song which makes them the main focal point of the song. This is fine but you should switch the drum pattern up every now and then. Maybe throw in a break hear and there. This is just an Idea but I hear a very quiet guitar in the background. Maybe try bringing that out if you can. I really like this!

LoveKavi responds:

Thanks a lot! Great feedback!

Its pretty good

The vocals and autotune are excellent (besides the fact that it's autotune). I can tell you spent some time on this and because of that this has a great appeal to it. In my opinion a hip hop song is 1/3 the lyrics and 2/3 the beat. The beat is ok but it is uses a melody we have all heard before. Haha but you didn't make the beat did you. Its very good overall. Collab?

emoruffino responds:

no collab..... still a major WIP

Nice!

I really like this but I have some suggestions:

The beginning would have been very pleasant had it not been for the annoying chime. You should bring the triangle in a few measures after the very beginning so as to create a build up (and turn it down). Some of the drums were a little weak. I really liked the piano though it is perfectly done. I did like how you lowered some of the drum and other instruments so you could put emphasis on the bass. Nice!

youtubenderdog311 responds:

Thanks for the future reference, man.

Coming up with a good song is one of the most fun things you can do. Everyone that makes music should know what I'm talking about...

Grant Bowtie @GrantBowtie

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