Yeeeeeaahh
This is bangin
Awesome flow on the verses
Awesome beat
Yeeeeeaahh
This is bangin
Awesome flow on the verses
Awesome beat
Awesome
I think that MickeyMao's lyrics definitely got me but I think his flow was slightly off when he tried to cram too many words into one sentence. But either way you guys both did awesome. Thanks for using my beat
Awesome
Awesome changes in ideas while sticking to the same theme. Nice job!
Hmm
I really like the lyrics. But just in case you were to resubmit this you shold set the the autotune to c minor. Cause there are occasions when its quite obviously off pitch. But man nice job I really like what you tried to do here.
Sweet
Nice the lyrics flow excellently and your rhymes are sweet. The beat was kinda weak though.
Well, at least I didn't make the beat :D Thanks for the feedback!
Awesome
This got me noddin immediately :)
Keep up the good work!
This is really good
It has a real flow to it and great job with the piano.
The chorus was great!
I have nothing to criticize
So good
I've always liked your stuff. If you ever want to collaborate just check my stuff out and let me know
will do. hit me up whenever. I appreciate the review!
Pretty good
I am really hoping this is just the intro cause there is a lot to be done
You definitely need to have a drop into something more intense later on
And those drums are very weak as well
I did like the idea and that distorted sound in the background was pretty cool also
You could work on finding a better melody
So a lot to change in my opinion but I'm sure you can do it:)
oh it's just the intro alright lol
I have a lot planned for this song, and the drop is loud and proud my friend.
Thanks for the advice :)
Dan
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